Wednesday, June 29, 2011

SOME MORE COUPLETS

Here are some more which I composed yesterday. These when compared to the ones in previous post show difference of age in thoughts, isn’t it?

DOSTON NE DE KAR DOSTI KA VASTAA DIYA JAAM PEENE KO,

EK EK KARKE SAB CHALE GAYE,

AB JAAM KA HI HAI SAATH JEENE KO.

( Friends made me to have a drink for sake of friendship, all have gone one by one, now this is the company to live lonely life. )

AFSOS THAA KI BACHON KO KHUSHIAN DENE KE LIYE

DAULAT NAHIN HAI

KAAM MEIN JUTE, KHOOB KAMAYA, PAR AB AFSOS HAI KI

BACHON KO DENE KE LIYE WAQT NAHIN HAI.

( I felt sad that there was no wealth to give happiness to children, worked hard made lot of money, but now am sad there is no time to give to children.)

EK ZAMAANAA THAA KI HIMMAT NAHIN THI KISI KI MERI

CHEEZEIN KARE YAHAAN SE WAHAAN,

AB ZAMAANAA HAI KI POOCHHTA HOON NATIYON SE

MERA CHASHMAA RAKHAA HAI KAHAAN.

( There was time no one dared to move my things from here to there, now is time when I ask my grandchildren my spectacles are hidden where.)

26 comments:

Dishita said...

Giggling at the last one. You are too late Jack in that ;)

Harman said...

So sweet..loved each paragraph so much...
written so well.
Close to reality ,somewhere I found it little bit sad....but then that's life!

Furree Katt said...

loved the last one! :D

maheen ahmed said...

loved them :)

Mishi said...

hahahaha the last line was awesome! my dada ji keeps on sying the same;p

v nice Jack:-)

Rachit said...

great musing :)

Weakest Link

Nidhi said...

The last one is totally cute. Spocken like a true grandfather. Hehe.

WarmSunshine said...

Nice ones uncle. Thanks for sharing. How are you doing? :-)

kavita said...

Loved them specially the last one.Thanks for the smiles .Have a nice weekend ::)

Raam Pyari said...

very well said :)

Pavitra .... said...

Really nice post!! :))
Especially the last one! :))
Take care! cheers!!

Jack said...

DISHITA :

At least I made you happy, isn't it? Take care


HARMAN :

Facts of life from an old man. Take care


FURREE :

I am so glad that you liked how things change in reality with passing time. Take care


MAHEEN :

Thanks for such appreciating comment. Take care

Jack said...

MISHI :

Reality isn't it? Thanks for such encouraging comments. Take care


RACHIT :

Welcome to my space. Hope to see you often. Please do give views on my old posts too, if you find time. Take care


NIDHI :

I am one, so true feelings. Thanks for visit. Hope to see you often. Take care


WARM SUNSHINE :

I am so happy to see you out of hibernation. We all are fine, what about you? Have you read some of my older posts also? Take care

Jack said...

KAVITA :

I feel so happy that you found these good enough to smile. Take care


RAAM PYARI :

Welcome to my space. Hope to see you more often. Please do give your valuable views on some of my older posts too, if you find time. Take care


PAVITRA :

I am so happy you liked these. Last one is from my heart. Take care

viddhi said...

beautiful..and very true ,all of them.
loved especially the last one.

yes, indeed i can see what difference age brings.

take care! :-)

Apurva said...

really very beautiful couplets! and so real, close to life :-)
loved them all
keendea

☆ Rià ღ said...

Good ones uncle Jack. :)

Jack said...

VIDDHI :

With age one starts getting realistic, isn't it? Take care


APURVA :

Life teaches new things everyday, isn't it? Take care


RIA :

I am so glad that you liked these. Take care

mudita said...

I hope the first one is not true to your life. I would definitely not want you to be a weak person taking to drink regularly out of loneliness. The second one is the sad truth of the present times. Who has time for their children? The third one is very cute. Thank God for the little children in ur life. Mudita.

Jack said...

MUDITA :

By the grace of God the first two are based on what I have seen in life but third one is personal experience. Thanks for your concern. I am so moved. Take care

Sach! said...

:( :( I miss my daadu. Calling him right now.. I don't want him to ask me unka chashma kahan hai.. he is my super man !!

Jack said...

SACH :

I would love to meet him. I am sure he adores and spoils you. Take care

Jigyasa said...

Lovely post.

I liked the first one and am sure my grandfather would love the last..!

Gr8 going uncle J.

Jack said...

JIGYASA :

I am so glad that you found these worthwhile. I hope I can meet your grandfather when he visits this side.

Take care

Riya Gupta said...

Its a very touching post, sir.

Loved the last one.

Jack said...

RIYA :

Welcome to my space. Hope to see you more often. Do try to read my older posts too if you can find time. If yo wish I can suggest some. I have been visiting you but may not be on daily basis.

Take care