Here are some more which I composed yesterday. These when compared to the ones in previous post show difference of age in thoughts, isn’t it?
DOSTON NE DE KAR DOSTI KA VASTAA DIYA JAAM PEENE KO,
EK EK KARKE SAB CHALE GAYE,
AB JAAM KA HI HAI SAATH JEENE KO.
( Friends made me to have a drink for sake of friendship, all have gone one by one, now this is the company to live lonely life. )
AFSOS THAA KI BACHON KO KHUSHIAN DENE KE LIYE
DAULAT NAHIN HAI
KAAM MEIN JUTE, KHOOB KAMAYA, PAR AB AFSOS HAI KI
BACHON KO DENE KE LIYE WAQT NAHIN HAI.
( I felt sad that there was no wealth to give happiness to children, worked hard made lot of money, but now am sad there is no time to give to children.)
EK ZAMAANAA THAA KI HIMMAT NAHIN THI
CHEEZEIN KARE YAHAAN SE WAHAAN,
AB ZAMAANAA HAI KI POOCHHTA HOON NATIYON SE
MERA CHASHMAA RAKHAA HAI KAHAAN.
( There was time no one dared to move my things from here to there, now is time when I ask my grandchildren my spectacles are hidden where.)
26 comments:
Giggling at the last one. You are too late Jack in that ;)
So sweet..loved each paragraph so much...
written so well.
Close to reality ,somewhere I found it little bit sad....but then that's life!
loved the last one! :D
loved them :)
hahahaha the last line was awesome! my dada ji keeps on sying the same;p
v nice Jack:-)
great musing :)
Weakest Link
The last one is totally cute. Spocken like a true grandfather. Hehe.
Nice ones uncle. Thanks for sharing. How are you doing? :-)
Loved them specially the last one.Thanks for the smiles .Have a nice weekend ::)
very well said :)
Really nice post!! :))
Especially the last one! :))
Take care! cheers!!
DISHITA :
At least I made you happy, isn't it? Take care
HARMAN :
Facts of life from an old man. Take care
FURREE :
I am so glad that you liked how things change in reality with passing time. Take care
MAHEEN :
Thanks for such appreciating comment. Take care
MISHI :
Reality isn't it? Thanks for such encouraging comments. Take care
RACHIT :
Welcome to my space. Hope to see you often. Please do give views on my old posts too, if you find time. Take care
NIDHI :
I am one, so true feelings. Thanks for visit. Hope to see you often. Take care
WARM SUNSHINE :
I am so happy to see you out of hibernation. We all are fine, what about you? Have you read some of my older posts also? Take care
KAVITA :
I feel so happy that you found these good enough to smile. Take care
RAAM PYARI :
Welcome to my space. Hope to see you more often. Please do give your valuable views on some of my older posts too, if you find time. Take care
PAVITRA :
I am so happy you liked these. Last one is from my heart. Take care
beautiful..and very true ,all of them.
loved especially the last one.
yes, indeed i can see what difference age brings.
take care! :-)
really very beautiful couplets! and so real, close to life :-)
loved them all
keendea
Good ones uncle Jack. :)
VIDDHI :
With age one starts getting realistic, isn't it? Take care
APURVA :
Life teaches new things everyday, isn't it? Take care
RIA :
I am so glad that you liked these. Take care
I hope the first one is not true to your life. I would definitely not want you to be a weak person taking to drink regularly out of loneliness. The second one is the sad truth of the present times. Who has time for their children? The third one is very cute. Thank God for the little children in ur life. Mudita.
MUDITA :
By the grace of God the first two are based on what I have seen in life but third one is personal experience. Thanks for your concern. I am so moved. Take care
:( :( I miss my daadu. Calling him right now.. I don't want him to ask me unka chashma kahan hai.. he is my super man !!
SACH :
I would love to meet him. I am sure he adores and spoils you. Take care
Lovely post.
I liked the first one and am sure my grandfather would love the last..!
Gr8 going uncle J.
JIGYASA :
I am so glad that you found these worthwhile. I hope I can meet your grandfather when he visits this side.
Take care
Its a very touching post, sir.
Loved the last one.
RIYA :
Welcome to my space. Hope to see you more often. Do try to read my older posts too if you can find time. If yo wish I can suggest some. I have been visiting you but may not be on daily basis.
Take care
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