I sat down wanting
to write,
But the ideas
forming are not bright.
I have so much to
share,
But mind does not
know to start from where.
All my thoughts
are in a jumble,
So all I can do is
just mumble.
Asking you all to
forgive my absence,
It is truth and
not a pretence.
Hope to be back
soon with something to your taste,
So as not to let
your precious time go waste.
22 comments:
That's a lovely poem you have written...
we will wait for you...until you return...
Take care
Gayu
nice is its poem or in general?
:) you want some time..
Writer's block...
I hate that phase.. u gt so much in mind but nothin comesout..
But it shall pass very soon :)
Writers' block :). This too shall pass.
and the best part is that even during this block you penned those words so nicely Sir....:)
Looking forward to read you soon....
Take care...!!
aww so nice :) :)
look at you, you say you dont have something worth to write and you rhymed the sentences!
hehehehe...:)
happens at time
words and feelings don't rhyme
don't worry
solution is there
go back
bang the roots
hit the ground
and soon you will regain the wound
Weakest LINK
Wow...that was a nice one Uncle Jack. :)
Aawww, you even put this so well.
Will wait for your return!
Take care,
Sonshu
www.thesonshu.com
happens happens... u wil sure come up soon! these days this is a constant stae of mind for me. once u pause, its difficult to start over again. how have u been Jack? long time didnt catch up
GAYU :
Thanks and new post on the way today. Take care
HARMAN :
I was going to write a post but this kept whirling in my mind, so I put it here. Take care
JYOTI :
Thanks, it passed. It was not much of a block than urge to pen a short poem. Take care
RACHNA :
I know it does happen. Do read what I told Jyoti above. Take care
IRFANUDDIN :
You caught me well. Take care
AMRITA :
Thanks a lot for such sweet appreciation. Take care
L2C :
When the brain does work,
The ideas never shirk,
Thoughts have a free flow,
Giving your words a pearly glow.
Take care
OLDFOX :
MERI IS Effort PAR HANSTAA HAI. KAAN BACHAA KAR RAKHNAA, MILNE PAR. Take care
RACHIT :
Thanks a lot for NEHLE PE DEHLAA. Take care
RIA :
Awww, thanks but can never compete with you. Take care
SONSHU :
AAPNE MERI IS TUKBANDI PAR JO HONSLAAFZAI KI,
US SE MERI AUR LIKHNE KI TAMNNAA BARHEGI HI. Take care
SHRUTI :
Nice to see you. True,if you do not keep using vehicle regularly, it will need a kick start. All is well, how about you? Take care
Lovely, just so lovely rhymes. :-) Hope you're having a pleasant day. Blessings to you and your family.
ELLEN :
I am so thankful for your appreciation. Take care
ahaa!
I like the glow even better :)
L2C :
I am so glad that you liked it. Take care
That's a wonderful expression on writer's block!! :)
Shilpa,
It happens at times,
When your efforts to rhyme,
Do match your thoughts,
So nothing goes up in naughts.
Welcome to my space and thanks for such appreciative views.
Take care
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