Friday, June 15, 2012

PARDON ME!


I sat down wanting to write,
But the ideas forming are not bright.
I have so much to share,
But mind does not know to start from where.
All my thoughts are in a jumble,
So all I can do is just mumble.
Asking you all to forgive my absence,
It is truth and not a pretence.
Hope to be back soon with something to your taste,
So as not to let your precious time go waste.

22 comments:

Gayu said...

That's a lovely poem you have written...
we will wait for you...until you return...

Take care
Gayu

Harman said...

nice is its poem or in general?
:) you want some time..

Jyoti Mishra said...

Writer's block...
I hate that phase.. u gt so much in mind but nothin comesout..

But it shall pass very soon :)

Rachna said...

Writers' block :). This too shall pass.

Irfanuddin said...

and the best part is that even during this block you penned those words so nicely Sir....:)

Looking forward to read you soon....
Take care...!!

Amrita said...

aww so nice :) :)

Live2cherish said...

look at you, you say you dont have something worth to write and you rhymed the sentences!

Oldfox004 said...

hehehehe...:)

Rachit said...

happens at time
words and feelings don't rhyme
don't worry
solution is there
go back
bang the roots
hit the ground
and soon you will regain the wound

Weakest LINK

RiĆ  said...

Wow...that was a nice one Uncle Jack. :)

Sonshu said...

Aawww, you even put this so well.

Will wait for your return!

Take care,

Sonshu
www.thesonshu.com

Shruti Mukundan said...

happens happens... u wil sure come up soon! these days this is a constant stae of mind for me. once u pause, its difficult to start over again. how have u been Jack? long time didnt catch up

Jack said...

GAYU :

Thanks and new post on the way today. Take care


HARMAN :

I was going to write a post but this kept whirling in my mind, so I put it here. Take care


JYOTI :

Thanks, it passed. It was not much of a block than urge to pen a short poem. Take care


RACHNA :

I know it does happen. Do read what I told Jyoti above. Take care

Jack said...

IRFANUDDIN :

You caught me well. Take care


AMRITA :

Thanks a lot for such sweet appreciation. Take care


L2C :

When the brain does work,
The ideas never shirk,
Thoughts have a free flow,
Giving your words a pearly glow.
Take care


OLDFOX :

MERI IS Effort PAR HANSTAA HAI. KAAN BACHAA KAR RAKHNAA, MILNE PAR. Take care

Jack said...

RACHIT :

Thanks a lot for NEHLE PE DEHLAA. Take care


RIA :

Awww, thanks but can never compete with you. Take care


SONSHU :

AAPNE MERI IS TUKBANDI PAR JO HONSLAAFZAI KI,
US SE MERI AUR LIKHNE KI TAMNNAA BARHEGI HI. Take care


SHRUTI :

Nice to see you. True,if you do not keep using vehicle regularly, it will need a kick start. All is well, how about you? Take care

Ellen said...

Lovely, just so lovely rhymes. :-) Hope you're having a pleasant day. Blessings to you and your family.

Jack said...

ELLEN :

I am so thankful for your appreciation. Take care

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Live2cherish said...

ahaa!
I like the glow even better :)

Jack said...

L2C :

I am so glad that you liked it. Take care

Shilpa Garg said...

That's a wonderful expression on writer's block!! :)

Jack said...

Shilpa,

It happens at times,
When your efforts to rhyme,
Do match your thoughts,
So nothing goes up in naughts.

Welcome to my space and thanks for such appreciative views.

Take care